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Post by Revel Yao Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:43 am

Revel sat in the mountains in the middle of her desert island. Whgat had she done? She woke up at home with blood on here hands! To make things worse she had this reoccuring nightmare. Slowly she realized it wasn't a nightmare. Letting out a long wail of defeat, she sobbed, scratching at her face and cutting it up, the blood dripping from her quickly closing after seconds. "Nonononononono NO OH GOD NO PLEASE!" She cried out, shaking her head violently. "No! Please.." she begged to noone in general. A sob caught in her throat and she covered her face and simply sobbed again.
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Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:56 am

Ming was floating in the middle of the ocean for no reason. She had just laid down on the beach with Xiaobo on top of her and fallen asleep. Apparently the tides had carried her out to sea, and the only land in sight was an island. "Hey, um Xiaobo, do you mind moving for a little bit? You're kind of squishing me." Ming asked, mumbling in her sleep. She was unaware of the fact that she was just floating in the ocean. Xiaobo stood up and squeaked in fright when he saw their predicament. He began walking all over Ming, prodding her with his paws, trying to wake her up. "What is it, Xiaobo?" Ming asked, and gasped when she saw that they were floating. Spotting the island, she began directing herself towards it, floating so Xiaobo didn't have to get in the water. Besides, he couldn't swim anyways. She reached the island and stood up calling, "Hey! Is anyone here?" She began wringing out her coat and dress. She had lately begun wearing a calf lenght coat everywhere she went, and the beach was no exception.

((Wow, that was long.))

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Post by Revel Yao Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:00 am

Revel was curled up on the cliff. She held her knees, sobbing audibly, her throat aching. She cried hard. Why? Why Dai?
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

Personell File
Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:07 am

"Oh well, I guess we're alone here. Unless someone didn't hear me." Ming said to Xiaobo. "Come on, let's go see where we're stuck for now." Ming started walking towards some mountains she could see in the distance. If only she could teleport, like Revel. Then she could be there in a matter of no time.

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Post by Revel Yao Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:08 am

Revel sniffled in a small ball on her own. Ama whined, then padded off quickly, catching the scent of a familiar person. Ama hurried catching sight of Ming. Scurrying to the girl, she yanked at Ming's ress, whining.
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

Personell File
Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:19 am

"Well hello there. I don't remember your name, but you're Revel's dog, aren't you?" Ming said to Ama, bending down to pet her. "Are you trying to take me somewhere? Is it something involving Revel? Is Revel hurt or something?" Ming stood up, prepared to follow Ama.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:04 am

Ama continued to drag Ming towards a direction.
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

Personell File
Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:24 am

"Ok, ok, I'm coming. No need to drag me!" Ming followed Ama, not sure what she was being led to. Xiaobo, tired of walking, leaped up onto Ming's head and draped his paws in her face as he laid down.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:04 am

Ama whined and ran ahead, hurrying to Revel's side.
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

Personell File
Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:32 am

"Revel, are you ok?" Ming asked, running to Revel's side and kneeling down.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:34 am

Revel shook her head, tears still in her eyes as she wiped her cheeks, Ama nuzzled up to her, whining in concern.
Revel Yao
Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:29 am

"Oh, what's wrong?" Ming asked, hugging Revel. Xiaobo purred softly and began rubbing on Revel.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:31 am

Ama whined, digging her nose into Revel's arm. Reel shook her head "I.. killed Dai.."
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:35 am

"You what? When? Oh wait, I don't even know Dai! Who is Dai?!?!?!?!"

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:37 am

Revel looked at Ming slowly, tears in her eyes, "I-I think it's been a couple days.. I woke up.. the blood.. everywhere.. and he's dead.. he was my bestfriend.. next to Yuan.." She shuddered remembering.
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:40 am

"Oh, I'm so sorry, Revel!" Ming continued hugging Revel and rubbing her shoulder gently. Xiaobo began to gently lick Revel's face.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:41 am

Ama whimpered and paced slightly, then laid down, got up and paced more. Revel hesitantly pet the cat and sighed shakily.
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Revel Yao

Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:42 am

Xiaobo continued to rub and lick Revel's face, calming her down and comforting her.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:46 am

Revel smiled weakly and closed her eyes, leaing her head back, "Ming... I-I want to break away from him.. but I can't.. he's trapped me like an infant in his hands and-and he tortures me.. almost dayly." She shuddered tears forming in her eyes again. She was referring to Father, Takegami.
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Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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Ability: Revel Shade
State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:48 am

"Who? Who are you talking about, Revel?" Ming asked, looking into Revel's eyes.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:17 am

Revel looked back in Ming's eyes, her own reflecting the chaos and pain within. "I mean Takegami.."
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Posts : 1404
Age : 33
Location : Wanderer

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State/Homuncules Title:: N/A
Rank:: Extravagence

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Post by Guest Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:33 am

"Take? I haven't seen him in such a long time! He wasn't that evil last time I saw him, is he really that bad now? No matter. Do you want to come with me? I'm going to go find Yuan, and I think he'll make you feel better." Ming said to Revel, standing up. She held out her hand to Revel, offering to help her stand up.

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